Pitch Feedback!!

SO, we got some fabulous feedback[alack?] from our teachers and the rest of the class yesterday after our pitch (which, as mentioned previously, went pretty well!)
The main feedback we got was:

• working out the exact structure and getting it really tight
• some of the specific shots sound quite difficult - make sure we test them out loads in advance
• make sure everyone's 100% clear about what we're doing within the group - simplify rather than overcomplicate
• make sure it's all planned properly

...and ideas like:

• if we can't find a white room, maybe cover a room with dust sheets
• we could use the Seward building? (new gallery under construction at school atm)
• make it very constructed for the 'perfect' setting, maybe break the fourth wall - have lighting in the shots etc. - to show how it's all constructed...
• try things with the frame rate on the camera - put it to about 20 to make the image juddery
• for the bridge, keep camera still on a tripod and don't move the camera between shots - the two versions can then be layered over each other

That's all [for now] folks!